this post was submitted on 27 Jun 2023
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I think that you have effectively captured cute and cozy here. The length indicates a kind of simplicity which supports how nice and uncomplicated the feeling is. Despite being short, it doesn't feel like it's lacking anything and indicates a kind of universality with the second person. Many of us have been fortunate enough to experience a moment very much like this one, and this is a pleasant reminder.
Glad you took a break from your writing hiatus to bring us this. Hopefully there's more where this came from.
Aww! Thank you so much for your kind words! Consider me 100% melted. I'm definitely planning on flexing those writing muscles more, so I'll make an effort to post here too!