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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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cold morning in april
and fading fast:
the shape of her,
half sharp, half real,
enough for now,
make it enough,
make it last one more minute,
just one more minute,
stop, just stop,
wait,
just another shared breath,
just one more whole life behind closed eyes,
i see the garden,
the green death, the blood bricks,
you speak a solemn spell,
the knotweed trembles,
the pines cry,
i wish you’re real again,
not a collection of days,
not a name carved,
not a tree in a deaf forest falling,
just to hear you,
what i wouldn't kill and bury and kill again,
but i break apart at the thought of a tear,
and the days gotta roll by,
and the train never takes a break,
station to station to station to black,
and i need you back,
i hear and smell and see and feel and love above all things real: a shimmer of a shadow,
but there you are,
the mind cradling
the heart it seems,
and if it was not of you, i’d dream of a dreamless death

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[–] [email protected] 3 points 2 months ago

Yes. Much thanks.