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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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A whisper inside betrays an illusion

Imputed identity fails to erase

New settings bring a certain confusion

I do not belong in this place

My mind wants to go home

Body reacting to novel, to new

Hiding from strange seed and spore

Protected stranger of blood and sinew

Haunted by memories of before

My bones want to go home

In me flows the blood of oppressors

Looking for a city on a hill

Now finding the saints as transgressors

Still touching the blood they did spill

My blood wants to go home

I want it all back—the ancient, the myths

I hear the Voice behind my ribs

My fingers itch to touch my megaliths

To feel history beyond the fibs

My heart wants to go home

If home is where heart is, mine isn't here

It isn't anywhere the Church is at rule

Holy men spoiled and ruled through fear

The Voice hushed by soldier and fool

My spirit wants to go home

From cypress and swamp, the little Voice calls

A brotherhood born of adversity

For the same Voice in me I hear from them all

Is silenced too in hopes of a city

May we all find our way home

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